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Some people suggest that youngsters should follow the old people but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The term respect is treated differently across the globe, largely depending on culture
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While some people believe that the young people should emulate the old, others of of the opinion that it is not necessary. The essay would discuss both sides of the argument and suggest why the young should follow the footsteps of the old. Following the footsteps of old people has its pros and cons. The issue of
advise
a proposal for an appropriate course of action
advice
 and experience comes into play here because it is believed that an older individual might have had a similar experience during their younger years.
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, a newly graduated doctor wants to perform a
sugery
the branch of medical science that treats disease or injury by operative procedures
surgery
 and the act happens to be a rather complex one, he would have to reach out to a more experienced hand to guide him on the procedures to take
inorder
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in order
 to avoid pitfalls. Nowadays the younger ones prefer to do things their own way and it has been somewhat successful. The issue of technology plays a huge role.
people
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People
 are inundated with so much information at their disposal that they can get things done at the snap of a finger rather than going to seek advice from an elderly person.
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, if
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 want to book for a flight as a
teenager i
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teenager, I
teenager I
 can easily do
this
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 online and my
eticket
a commercial document showing that the holder is entitled to something (as to ride on public transportation or to enter a public entertainment)
ticket
 would be forwarded to my email. In summary
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 the essay has discussed why it might be beneficial for younger ones to follow the elders and
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 why they
dont
do not
don't
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in my opinion inasmuch as technology gives younger ones a platform to thrive
beyong
the state or fact of existing
being
 measure, experience
can not
can not
cannot
 be taught online
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it is mostly
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hands on
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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