Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do different kinds of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Career

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Irrespective of the importance we give to it, it still ends up being undervalued. The reason being very

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free from ambiguity

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. We hardly understand the humungous part it plays in our life.

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the above stance on an emotional level, A person, say a software engineer works 9 hours a day. Let's add two more hours for commuting and other extended work hours. So it would amount to 11 hours a

day which

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day, which

would amount to almost half of a day. If he is even a little unhappy about it, he wouldn't be enjoying a major part of his life. A change would either help him be

happy or worst case

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a happy or worst case

make him realise and accept the nature of the work.

On the other hand

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If the person is happy with his work, a change would mean an opportunity to be happier.It is a win win situation.

Finacially

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Financially

, I could quote my very example.Raj and myself joined IT Industry 9 years back. I have been part of the same organization, working

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similar jobs for the entire span. Raj, gained business knowledge

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completed an MBA and is now working as a consultant to software projects earning twice as I do. Considering the above aspects associated with career, I would agree with the people who think it is better to change

career

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careers

at least once in their life.

Tue Oct 08 2019

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