The number of trips made by children in one country aged 5-12 years in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.

The graph shows the
number
of trips made by children in one country aged 5-12 years in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of
transport
.
Firstly
, 5 modes of
transport
have been described in the graph
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
.e.
car
Suggestion
Car
passenger
, walking, cycling, walking and bus, and by bus. In the
year
1990 walking has been used by
maximum
Suggestion
the maximum number
number
of children as a
mode
of
transport
, 12
million
trips were taken by walking that
year
. Travel by bus takes
second
place in the total
number
of trips taken by children in the
year
1990 and there is very little difference between travel by cycling and walking and bus, approximately 6
million
trips in both cases and travel by
car
was
Suggestion
were
the least as it has only approximately 4
million
trips in the
year
1990.
Secondly
, if we talk about the
year
2010 the maximum
number
of trips were taken by
car
passenger
a total of approximately 11
million
children. Walking was the
second
most common way of
transport
in the
year
2010, taken by 6
million
people which
Accept comma addition
people, which
is more than half of what we saw in the
year
2010. Travel by bus was preferred by 5
million
children on an estimate and walking and bus was the choice of as many as 3
million
people and cycling
was
Suggestion
were
the least used
mode
of
transport
in the
year
2010 used by only 2
million
children. Overall, there is a drastic change in the choice of, children's choice of
mode
of
transport
from walking being the most used and
car
passenger
the least used in the
year
1990, in 2010
car
passenger
became the most popular
mode
of
transport
.
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