All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

#cars #fuels

Cars have become an important part of our lives, we all drive it to go wherever we want to. According to me, it will be a good move to ban the use of fossil fuels to run the

car

and to replace it with electric cars. Pollution is increasing with each day and fossil fuels are getting decreased proportionally. The number of cars is increasing each day, now there is at least one

car

in each house and so more traffic on the roads that lead to air pollution and which in turn leads to several health problems too

for example

breathing problems. Using an electric

car

as compared to the one with fossil fuel is safer because petrol/diesel is highly flammable which can result in loss of

car

Suggestion

loss of life. The most important reason to support

this

ban is to save fossil fuels from getting extinct as they are the non-renewable sources of energy. So, in my opinion, it will be a good idea to replace the fuel cars with electric cars.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

175 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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air pollution
greenhouse gases
climate change
sustainable
renewable
electric vehicles
battery technology
charging infrastructure
range anxiety
government support
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subsidies
renewable energy
environmental impact
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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Many people find it difficult to speak in front of and to present to anaudience. It is believed that this skill should be taught in school. Why is this important? To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Air pollution is one of the largest problems the world is facing today. What are some causes of air pollution and what measures can be proposed to solve this problem?

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