Experts say older people were happier and healteir in the past because they did more excercise and spent more time with family and friends, whereas many now suffer from loneliness and health problems. What are the causes of this and what are some solutions ?
Researchers reported that aged individuals lived
better
Suggestion
the good
life
in the past as they were physically active and spent major time to be socialise, while some of them
faces problems of them or themselves
their
such
isolation and unhealthy.In this
essay I will examine the causes of this problems
and discuss some possible remedies.
The two major causes of these problems Suggestion
this problem
these problems
is
Suggestion
are
insufficent
knowledge of the modern technology and of a quantity not able to fulfill a need or requirement
insufficient
laziness
of them. Suggestion
laziest
Nowadays majority
of people Suggestion
The nowadays majority
use
the social media to socialise with friends and families, while people who are over 60 does not know how to use
this
medias
. Due to a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
this
reason they are unable to be with their families. Moreover
, most of these persons leads
Suggestion
lead
sedentary
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sedentary lives
a sedentary life
life
without nutritious dieat
.As a a prescribed selection of foods
diet
diets
consquence
, they a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
consequence
are suffer
from serious health issues, Suggestion
are suffering
are suffered
have suffered
such
as obesity and heart disease. For example
, research conducted by the Health Department of India reported that more than 60% of older people have cardiac diseasebecause
of leading inactive Suggestion
disease because
life style
and consuming fatty food.a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
Thus
, more use
of the Internet and laziness of older people make
them alone and ill.
Some possible solution for these situations is raising Suggestion
makes
awerness
about having knowledge of
awareness
use
of technology and by subsidising the Suggestion
the use
finess
centres. By providing information about the quality of being suitable
fitness
technoloy's
negative effect on the older people to youth, we can make the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technologies
olders
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
more happy
.Suggestion
happier
For instance
, if grandchild
Suggestion
the grandchild
a grandchild
know
that his grandparents suffer from loneliness, most of them will certainly Suggestion
knows
spent
their leisure with grandparents. Suggestion
spend
Also
, subsidising gyms and other sport activity, government
could help Suggestion
the government
age group
above 60.To Suggestion
an aging group
aging group
examplify
be characteristic of
exemplify
this
, if people gain financial help from state government in fitness clubs, most of them join this clubs
. So, providing subsidies by state and raising Suggestion
this club
these clubs
awarness
in young people might be useful for having knowledge of
awareness
olders
.
To conclude, Three decades ago people were used to plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
more joyful
Suggestion
a more joyful life
life
and socialise,
but because of the invention and Accept space
,
inactive lifestyle
, many of them are alone or suffer from critical diseases.Suggestion
inactive lifestyles
an inactive lifestyle
However
, this
problem could be solve
with funding in fitness centres and informing young about Suggestion
could be solved
this
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