Experts say older people were happier and healteir in the past because they did more excercise and spent more time with family and friends, whereas many now suffer from loneliness and health problems. What are the causes of this and what are some solutions ?

Researchers reported that aged individuals lived
better
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the good
life
in the past as they were physically active and spent major time to be socialise, while some of
them
of them or themselves
their
faces problems
such
isolation and unhealthy.In
this
essay I will examine the causes of
this problems
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this problem
these problems
and discuss some possible remedies. The two major causes of these problems
is
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are
insufficent
of a quantity not able to fulfill a need or requirement
insufficient
knowledge of the modern technology and
laziness
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laziest
of them.
Nowadays majority
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The nowadays majority
of people
use
the social media to socialise with friends and families, while people who are over 60 does not know how to
use
this
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
. Due to
this
reason they are unable to be with their families.
Moreover
, most of these persons
leads
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lead
sedentary
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sedentary lives
a sedentary life
life
without nutritious
dieat
a prescribed selection of foods
diet
diets
.As a
consquence
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
consequence
, they
are suffer
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are suffering
are suffered
have suffered
from serious health issues,
such
as obesity and heart disease.
For example
, research conducted by the Health Department of India reported that more than 60% of older people have cardiac
diseasebecause
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disease because
of leading inactive
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
and consuming fatty food.
Thus
, more
use
of the Internet and laziness of older people
make
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makes
them alone and ill. Some possible solution for these situations is raising
awerness
having knowledge of
awareness
about
use
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the use
of technology and by subsidising the
finess
the quality of being suitable
fitness
centres. By providing information about
technoloy's
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technologies
negative effect on the older people to youth, we can make
olders
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
more happy
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happier
.
For instance
, if
grandchild
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the grandchild
a grandchild
know
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knows
that his grandparents suffer from loneliness, most of them will certainly
spent
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spend
their leisure with grandparents.
Also
, subsidising gyms and other sport activity,
government
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the government
could help
age group
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an aging group
aging group
above 60.To
examplify
be characteristic of
exemplify
this
, if people gain financial help from state government in fitness clubs, most of them join
this clubs
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this club
these clubs
. So, providing subsidies by state and raising
awarness
having knowledge of
awareness
in young people might be useful for
olders
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
. To conclude, Three decades ago people were used to
more joyful
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a more joyful life
life
and socialise
,
Accept space
,
but because of the invention and
inactive lifestyle
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inactive lifestyles
an inactive lifestyle
, many of them are alone or suffer from critical diseases.
However
,
this
problem
could be solve
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could be solved
with funding in fitness centres and informing young about
this
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary lifestyles
  • technological advancements
  • work culture
  • urbanization
  • geographical separation
  • mental health stigma
  • traditional family structures
  • intergenerational living
  • physical activity
  • social interactions
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