Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to in suburbs or countryside rather cities To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Working from
home
has been popularised since the post- modern era. While some consider it is a negative development, there remains some
dis agreement
a conflict of people's opinions or actions or characters
disagreement
too. In my opinion, I believe that by doing
this
has advantages not only to workers, but the society as well.
Frst
preceding all others in time or space or degree
First
of all, it is an indisputable fact that when a person works from
home
insted
in place of, or as an alternative to
instead
of commuting to his office can contribute more
time
to his family.
In other words
, the employee no longer does travel to work or spend money for either car or bus as he
sits his
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sits in his home
home
and complete his task. Eventually, staff can save
,
Accept space
,
for instance
, money,
time
, and materials for their family
immensily
to an exceedingly great extent or degree
immensely
.
additionally
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Additionally
,
b oth
two things or people together
both
older and younger generations in the family, who are more likely to get benefited from
this
since their family members around them all the
time
. Having stayed all the
time
home
, those who work from their most comfortable environment, staff can balance work- life
effectively
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effectiveness
and properly. Yet, another point is
to taken
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taken
taking
into account is that
this
enables to resolve many problems in the society. One obvious merit could be
reduction
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a reduction
reduced
reduce
reducing
in
trafffic
the aggregation of things (pedestrians or vehicles) coming and going in a particular locality during a specified period of time
traffic
congestion, when
less number
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the less number
of daily commuters on
road
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the road
,
this
can hugely resulting in lesson traffic blocks especially during peak rush hours.
Similarly
,
this
also help
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also helps
has also helped
the country
to reduce
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reduce
fossil fuel use since only
minimal number
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a minimal number
the minimal number
of employees travel to work. Apart from
this
, regarding business firms, they would experience better productivity as the amount of
money which
Accept comma addition
money, which
spend for
traval
change location; move, travel, or proceed, also metaphorically
travel
allawence
an amount allowed or granted (as during a given period)
allowance
allowances
, now, can be
channelised
direct the course; determine the direction of travelling
channelized
to provide incentives to workers: perks, paid holidays,
and paternal and maternity
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maternity and paternity
and paternity and maternity
laeve
go away from a place
leave
;
therefore
, it enhances
morale
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the morale
of the staff, and make them to contribute even more to his or her organisation. By way of conclusion, even though people are differed about employing from
home
, I again reaffirm that
this
is
benefical
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
for families and the society extensively. It is predicted that, in coming years, more and more offices' would be attracted towards
this
mode of
empoyement
the state of being employed or having a job
employment
pattern.
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