Topic: It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents . Do you agree or disagree .

In today's time it is really important to keep yourself updated according to the outside world, but

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requires several sacrifices out of which one is to stay away from your guardians. Education plays an important role to prepare a person for

better life

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a better life

ahead and for

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you need to keep yourself updated with, how the education is

system

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systematically

changing. Study teaches you not only to gain good marks to get a better job, but

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teaches you discipline and gives you the courage and thinking to change the world positively. In order to get the education to become a better person you need to choose the right school or

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or university to brush up your talents and

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to get into the habit to stay disciplined. If the students will stay away from their parents for higher

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studies, then

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it will

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benefit

for them in terms of, to learn how things are going on globally because not all the colleges or universities are equipped with the modern

ideas of study

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study of ideas

and standards

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lack which

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end up wasting money of the parents, time and hard work of the students. Leaving your parents or staying away from your parents for the betterment of your upcoming life will make them a proud parent once the child will become a successful person, on contrary if you choose not to leave your family and pursue the

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studies from your hometown and later realize that you just wasted your time though their is no difference in what was taught at your

college

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versus what the outside

college

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would have taught you, but the difference is how it was taught and

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because it helped you only to score good but didnt give you any confidence and didn't enhance your personality too. So, in my

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opinion, there

opinion there

is no harm in sending your children away from you if it brightens their life.