Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

In the past decade, the consumption of goods and services has grown by leaps and bounds.
This
has led advertising companies to employ various unethical and negative methods to attract more customers. I personally believe advertising of products should be limited and there should be policies to verify their methods. On the internet, there are numerous websites that capture your data during the registration process and
then
sell your information like email, phone number and address to the advertising companies. These companies use
this
information to contact people by making phone calls and emails. The aforementioned means of communication
causes
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cause
disturbance and irritation
to
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for
people as these companies sometime call at late hours which is totally unacceptable.
In addition
, there are
number
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a number
of cases where people have reported
ransomware
and
malware viruses
Accept comma addition
malware, viruses
in these
mails
an animal that produces gametes (spermatozoa) that can fertilize female gametes (ova)
males
which is a violation of internet usage policies.
Moreover
, some groups of people hired by marketing firms, hang posters on walls of buses, trains and private properties to promote their services and products.
For example
, to increase income of private educational institutions, owners employ people to apply ads to every possible vacant place in the city which is mostly walls of houses and
backside
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the backside
of buses. These acts are totally illegal and should be taken into note
of
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by
authorities as these acts damage government and private assets. To conclude, today’s society needs friendly and acceptable means of advertisement. Our government should monitor marketing strategies of listed companies and should make sure any act of these agencies does not cause any kind problem or inconvenience to our society.

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