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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles, others think there are other better ways. *Discuss both sides and give your opinion.*

#people #road #safety #limits #vehicles #*discuss
It is a belief held by many that minimizing speed limit on automobiles is the perfect mean to enhance
road
security
, while others opine that there are other preferred ways. In my opinion,com
p
Accept space
,
elling
road
 users to comply with
road
safety
 rules will play a vital role in ensuring the
road
 is secured for use.
To begin
 with, the practice of minimizing vehi
cles spe
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vehicle
vehicle's
ed limits will be beneficial in improving
road
security
. Most automobile users fail to comply with the speed limit provided by the
road
safety
 regulatory body ,du
e
Accept space
,
to
this
, the high
ways hav
a major road for any form of motor transport
highways
e been rendered unsafe as it has recorded a reoccurring rise in
road
traffic
 accidents that some
time lea
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
d to permanent deformation or the dead
of
the event of dying or departure from life
death
those involved.
For instance
, it was reported by Times magazine that majo
rity of
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the majority
road
traffic
 acci
dent occ
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accidents
ur because of the high speed with which vehicle drivers navigate.
On the contrary
, there are other ways that will be beneficial in improving high
way
a major road for any form of motor transport
highway
safety
.
Firstly
,
road
 uses
sho
a person who makes use of a thing; someone who uses or employs something
users
uld be taught to utilize the
road
traffic
 light. They should be well informed on when to stop, wait or move.
In addition
, automobile users must
also
 ensure their vehicles are good enough for
road
 use.
This
 can
be achieve by
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can be achieved
a regular check on the components of the vehicles. To exemplify, the head of
road
safety
 unit in Nigeria gave a talk on the importance of obeying
traffic
 light directives and
also
 on the need to use a pe
r
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A
fectly functional vehicle. He
further
 spoke about how vital they are in enhancing
road
security
. In conclusion, a proper
road
safety
 practice will help save life and property. From my point of view,
road
 users should be made to comply with all the laid down
road
safety
 rules at all time, as
this
 will play a positive role in saving lives and properties and
also
 improve
road
security
.
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