Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?
Obesity has become one of the risk factors for many life style disorders. Primarily, two reasons for the same, that are excessive consumption of fast food and lack of exercise;
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, these above- mentioned causes can be reduced by taking proper actions, which requires a joint effort from both the public and the government part. One obvious method is that, educating younger generations about the consequences of being obese. By including healthy options and various exercise modalities in the school syllabus, can enlighten the children. Other possible strategies could be imprinting statutory warning over the packets of these junk foods that stating the adverse effects of consuming Linking Words
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