Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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question asks the writer’s opinion on whether taking pictures of celebrities by the

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on a constant basis is an invasion of privacy or if it is just

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of the many prices that

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must pay for being famous.From

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side, I understand the

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a mental position from which things are viewed

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as capturing pictures of various celebrities is their only source of income. I have seen several documentaries on

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photographers have to literally “hunt” for celebrities throughout the day just to make a

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abused physically and verbally by the celebrities themselves. I have seen many

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viral videos where a

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sucker punches a photographer after getting annoyed by the constant flashes of light. In

India

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India, for

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, Bollywood celebrities treat a lot of these photographers as “people of a lesser class” and it is quite sad to see how

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scenarios play out. I have seen instances where the Indian

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to glance at them just to get the right shot and the

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does it with a sense of grandeur and arrogance. At times, I believe humans are responsible for fixing a price or value above a certain individual’s head.

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However speaking

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from the perspective of a

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, it can actually get annoying at times if you are

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your personal space wherever you go. Apart from the

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have to deal with countless fans who surround them wherever they go. In a way, these people lose their freedom of leading “normal” lives and must try various tactics to avoid being noticed by the public. For example, the rapper Kanye West goes shopping at odd hours in the early morning to avoid being caught by the flashes of light.

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he was not so lucky as three photographers began following him

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upset the iconic artist. I forgot the name of the video, but it should be there on

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somewhere. From my personal opinion, I honestly believe that

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must be allowed to take photographs and follow celebrities around but with restrictions imposed.

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law should allow a photographer to click only a certain number of photographs per day. Or they can only be allowed to chase celebrities for a half a mile or a few minutes, etc.

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reduces the pressure on the celebrities and it

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regulates the

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industry.

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must be formally hired by media houses

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of dealing with them on a freelance basis.

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will stop the photographers from chasing celebrities all night just to make a living. To conclude, it is important that the

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be given the right to tail the

celebrities but

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celebrities, but

only for a limited time and must be given full-time jobs

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the media industry. I do not believe

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

515 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

invasion of privacy
personal space
media scrutiny
mental health
public figures
relentless pursuit
legal implications
ethical considerations
tabloid journalism
financial gain
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