Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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question asks the writer’s opinion on whether taking pictures of celebrities by the
paparazzi
on a constant basis is an invasion of privacy or if it is just
one
of the many prices that
one
must pay for being famous.From
one
side, I understand the
Paparazzi
’s
view-point
a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoint
viewpoints
as capturing pictures of various celebrities is their only source of income. I have seen several documentaries on
Youtube where
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YouTube, where
YouTube where
a lot of
such
photographers have to literally “hunt” for celebrities throughout the day just to make a
meager
deficient in amount or quality or extent
meagre
income. At times, they are
also
abused physically and verbally by the celebrities themselves. I have seen many
such
viral videos where a
celebrity
sucker punches a photographer after getting annoyed by the constant flashes of light. In
India
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India, for
for example
, Bollywood celebrities treat a lot of these photographers as “people of a lesser class” and it is quite sad to see how
such
scenarios play out. I have seen instances where the Indian
paparazzi
literally beg
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literally begs
the
celebrity
to glance at them just to get the right shot and the
celebrity
does it with a sense of grandeur and arrogance. At times, I believe humans are responsible for fixing a price or value above a certain individual’s head.
However speaking
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However, speaking
from the perspective of a
celebrity
, it can actually get annoying at times if you are
notgiven
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not given
your personal space wherever you go. Apart from the
paparazzi
, celebrities
also
have to deal with countless fans who surround them wherever they go. In a way, these people lose their freedom of leading “normal” lives and must try various tactics to avoid being noticed by the public. For example, the rapper Kanye West goes shopping at odd hours in the early morning to avoid being caught by the flashes of light.
However even
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However, even
he was not so lucky as three photographers began following him
one
night whichreally
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night, which really
night which really
upset the iconic artist. I forgot the name of the video, but it should be there on
Youtube
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YouTube
somewhere. From my personal opinion, I honestly believe that
paparazzi
must be allowed to take photographs and follow celebrities around but with restrictions imposed.
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The
law should allow a photographer to click only a certain number of photographs per day. Or they can only be allowed to chase celebrities for a half a mile or a few minutes, etc.
This
reduces the pressure on the celebrities and it
also
regulates the
paparazzi
industry.
Also
,
paparazzi
must be formally hired by media houses
instead
of dealing with them on a freelance basis.
This
will stop the photographers from chasing celebrities all night just to make a living. To conclude, it is important that the
paparazzi
be given the right to tail the
celebrities but
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celebrities, but
only for a limited time and must be given full-time jobs
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in
the media industry. I do not believe
this
to likely occur, but it is my personal opinion based on the questions asked for
this
task.
Afterall
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After all
, it is the demand from the general public that causes
this
industry to thrive.
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