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Nowadays artificial intelligence is being used to drive cars. Why is this happening? Is it positive or negative development?

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In today’s world human are more dependent on technology rather than before. Commuters are using artificial
intelligence
 for travelling. Due to the fact that technology has improved a lot in yesteryears, it has brought positive effects in human’s life, people are using artificial
intelligence
 because it reduces the person’s workload.
To begin
 with, self-driven cars reduces the chances of an accident, almost 80% of people losing their life due to the human error. It might not be easy to tackle
this
 problem,
however
 artificial
intelligence
 can be the way forward to reduce
this
 problem.
For example
, Google has introduced the
car
 with artificial
intelligence
, it aware drive on dangerous situation, so the driver can hold the
car
 before the accident. I believe that
this
 development should be taken as a positive development, because it is helping humanity to reduce the road accident and preventing them from facing a catastrophic situation.
For example
, after having alcohol or while heart attack it really difficult to drive a
car
 and
consequently
 it can become that worst situation for drivers as well as whom he hit the
car
. In conclusion, using of artificial
intelligence
car
 should be encouraged by all of us, in order to save many human’s lives.
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