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Many people are spending a lot of money on their weddings. Do you think this is a good thing?

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In the modern world, it is commonly seen most individuals spend a tremendous amount of funds to have grate matrimonies.
although
Suggestion
Although
 on the one hand, it is reasonable to celebrate the most wonderful event of their
life
 with their family and
friedns
a person you know well and regard with affection and trust
friends
.
However
, I believe spending so much
money
 to celebrate only one
grate
a person who has achieved distinction and honor in some field
great
day
 of
life
 cannot be accepted.
Firstly
, many individuals use to have bank loans to get an enormous wedding
day but
Accept comma addition
day, but
 sometimes, it is extremely beyond their level. Most of the time those who get loans, will not able to pay after the wedding. After the wedding, they will struggle with those debts. As a consequence of it, those individuals will not able to spend happily married
life
 with those
money
 issues. As an example, without
money
, those couples will not able to spend on their
day
 to
day
 processes like food, medical and other services.
Moreover
, debs can be an effect on the development of the family.
Secondly
, to spend a huge amount of
money
 for a simple party cannot be accepted. Clearly, In the general population, many individuals suffer from poverty.
For instance
, some children don't have enough resources and funds to achieve their
life
 goals and dreams. As an example, there are many talented children in the world, which is don't have enough
money
 to study. It is important to help those people
instead
 of wasting
money
 on partying is
grate humanity service
Suggestion
a grate humanity service
the grate humanity service
 that those wedding couples can be satisfied in their lifetime.
Finally
, I believe spending a tremendous amount of cash on one matrimonial, better that has a simple wedding and help other people or use those
funs
a weapon that discharges a missile at high velocity (especially from a metal tube or barrel)
guns
 to have a great
life
 is the best thing to do.

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