Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Giving

money

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to students act like

reinforcement

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a reinforcement

for them. For students it will be a golden opportunity to earn

money

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every time they score well in their

school

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and

hence

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I agree with the given idea. I feel

this

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way because of the following reasons that I will explore in the following passage.

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of all, I believe that when children receive

money

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for obtaining good grades in the

school

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, it will act for them as a reward. They feel highly motivated when they get to know that their hard

work

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is

appreciating

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appreciated

by their parents. It will give them

impetus

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the impetus

to do more hard

work

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and put more endeavours to achieve not only good grades but

also

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some monetary prize

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. My personal experience is a compelling of

this

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. During my

school

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days my father used to give me

small amount

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a small amount

of

money

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whenever I performed

good

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well

in my studies and

thus

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it gave

me

of me or myself

my

zeal to put more efforts and obtain accolades from my family in

form

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the form

of their

money

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along with their praise and love.

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, I think that students will get to know the value of

money

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. They will realize that it is not easy to earn

money

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. It requires lots hard

work

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to earn

money

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. It will be a better way for them to learn that in future they will to be committed towards their

work

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or job if they need

good raise

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a good raise

in the salary.

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, my brother used to spend his pocket

money

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on needless and impractical things. When he started working he realised that it requires dedication and hard

work

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to earn

money

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. Now he knows the value of

money

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and spends it reasonably. To sum up with, I am of the opinion that parents should provide

money

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for each high grade they achieve in

school

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because they will feel appreciated and they learn the value of

money

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.