Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Many working people don't have enough time to exercise. They usually don't have a car and have to go to
work
by a taxi or bus or train and so on.
Also
, their office may be far from their
home
. So if they want to arrive their
work
in time, they will have to wake up early in the morning. They usually
work
over time and when they come back
home
, they are very tired.
For example
, I
work
9 hours in a day and I get stuck in traffic  when I want to come back
home
. When I arrive
home
, I like to take a shower and rest. I think of preventing from health problems, we should do a simple exercise between daily activities in 5 up to 10 minutes and devote a few hours to sport in holidays.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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