public libraries provide a large collection of books to read. Some people argue that they should also provide other hi-tech facilities like computer,internet,CDs,DVDs. do u agree or disagree with the statement?

Public libraries are
throught
the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
thought
by some to have had hi-tech facilities
,
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,
for
example computer
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example, computer
as well as CDs and DVDs.
However
, I believe that modern era is the era of technology where all
service
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services
including
education are
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education, are
now incorporating technology to a great extent. I completely agree that modern technology facilities should be included in public
library
.
To begin
with, people come to
library
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the library
libraries
in order to read books and to gain knowledge which enhance their creativity in different field. Many times readers who do not get their desired information on books, whereas the internet becomes extremely useful to find out the information that they are searching for. To develop listening skill,
moreover
, of any language
,
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,
a learner must practice listening.
Therefore
, if any
library provided
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library, provided
that readers can easily develop these nurture
skill
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skills
. The British
council
a body serving in an administrative capacity
Council
library
in Dhaka,
for instance
, is equipped with various CDs
,
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,
computer and other
applience
a device or control that is very useful for a particular job
appliances
appliance
.
Although
, the member of the
library
can easily avail themselves of the amenities.In fact, these days, we can see that the world publication has
greately
to an extraordinary extent or degree
greatly
changed and many books
,
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,
documentaries and other useful reference which
are being converted
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is being converted
to CDs and DVDs.
Furthermore
, maintaining
,
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,
handling and storing digital media is easier than of books.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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