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In many countries people tend to move overseas or move to a different part of their country after retirement. Discuss why this is so and the outcomes of this situation. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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The above shown diagrams describe about A wave energy
machine
. A wave energy
machine
 Consist of two chambers and two turbines, one chamber consist of to increase water levels and
second
 Consist of air to flow outside of the wave energy
machine
. To electricity generator the turbines should do work hard and it spins around. When the water level increases the air flow will go through the chamber, it goes outside of the
machine
. There should be air flow outside of the
machine
 waterways is high,
then
 electricity bill generator works.
First
 have to check the location of Energy
machine
 should placed in the correct order than only it works in the proper manner. When the large waves high output of high installation cost, when small waves low output low installation costs.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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