There are an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some peopel say that the best way would be to use death penalty as a deterrent, many people that other measures will be needed. Discuss both sides and opine.

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Crime

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is rising at an alarming rate in the contemporary world. To curb the problem there is a school of thought that says capital punishment can help in overcoming the

crime

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while others say that different methods should be implemented.

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essay intends to discuss both the views and will conclude about why I believe that depending on the

crime

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punishment should be given. On the one hand, the exponential rise in

crime

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such

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as murder, snatching, and rape are making people fear-stricken.

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, judicial execution is being considered as the only solution by some masses.

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crime

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report in India says that, one rape case is registered every day, more than a dozen reports on chain snatching are seen who have either snatched, tried to sn

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as money, property, wealth and dispute in the family.

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, people feel unsafe even in their own homes, and strict actions can only fear of death can prohibit the rise in

crime

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, there are several other ways of punishing the convict that can help in reducing the

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rate. It follows that

life

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imprisonment

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or at least twenty-four-year

imprisonment

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can do all the good to the people.

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imprisonment

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, which will halt the

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to some extent. Whereas, of

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of twenty-four years.

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people, and

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serve the purpose of creating fear among the criminal minds. To conclude, a rapid rise in

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is considerable in the era of technology. I believe that capital of

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imprisonment

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needs to be implemented for every other type of

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imprisonment

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deals criminals in a better way.

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There are an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some peopel say that the best way would be to use death penalty as a deterrent, many people that other measures will be needed. Discuss both sides and opine.

Your opinion

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs ( for example, working for a charity , improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that the amount of noise that people make should be strictly controlled. Others say that people should be free to make as much noise as they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People living in the 21st century have a better life quality than people who lived in previous times. to whta extent do you agree or disagree?