There are an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some peopel say that the best way would be to use death penalty as a deterrent, many people that other measures will be needed. Discuss both sides and opine.

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Crime
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is rising at an alarming rate in the contemporary world. To curb the problem there is a school of thought that says capital punishment can help in overcoming the
crime
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while others say that different methods should be implemented.
This
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essay intends to discuss both the views and will conclude about why I believe that depending on the
crime
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punishment should be given. On the one hand, the exponential rise in
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such
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as murder, snatching, and rape are making people fear-stricken.
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, judicial execution is being considered as the only solution by some masses.
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,
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report in India says that, one rape case is registered every day, more than a dozen reports on chain snatching are seen who have either snatched, tried to sn
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as money, property, wealth and dispute in the family.
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, people feel unsafe even in their own homes, and strict actions can only fear of death can prohibit the rise in
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.
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, there are several other ways of punishing the convict that can help in reducing the
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rate. It follows that
life
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imprisonment
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or at least twenty-four-year
imprisonment
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can do all the good to the people.
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, a serious of
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a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others
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hould be given immediate
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imprisonment
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, which will halt the
crime
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to some extent. Whereas, of
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a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others
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f stealing and trafficking should have
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of twenty-four years.
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, it will not hurt the moral sentiments of the pe
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people, and
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serve the purpose of creating fear among the criminal minds. To conclude, a rapid rise in
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is considerable in the era of technology. I believe that capital of
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a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others
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life
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imprisonment
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needs to be implemented for every other type of
crime
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.
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a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others
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s imperative to create reduce
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while discussing the op
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opinions
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f those who think
life
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imprisonment
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deals criminals in a better way.

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