The difference in age between parents and their children has increased compared to the past. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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Flourishing the technological sophistication has

lead

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led

to the change in the thought process of humans. Nowadays, the distinction

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the age between

nurturers

the essential qualities or characteristics by which something is recognized

natures

and their offsprings is wider than it used to be in the gone-by eras.

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it has some demerits

such

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as fewer understandings, I believe

this

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trend has more advantages: provide moral education as well as cater to their needs.

To begin

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with, given the cons of

this

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trend, it is quite clear that mutual understanding is not present in the parents and their children due to the widening gap between their ages. Owing to the

gap generation,

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generation gap,

thinking, lifestyle and opinions of young adults are different as compared to their parents, resultantly, arguments are more likely to arise among them just on silly things. Psychologists have revealed that in the U.S, 30% of young ones live in a separate apartment, despite the presence of parents, due to lack of understanding with their elders. In spite of some shortcomings mentioned above, I believe that there are far more pros.

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, when parents plan children later in life than they get stable in their career

until

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starting a new phase of life,

as a result

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of which they give birth to healthy children and cater to their needs easily,

consequently

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, better education is provided. In Sweden, after having stability in job, people in the age of 35's and 40's plan to have a child so that they can nurture him/her properly.

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, getting mature helps in gaining

vast variety

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a vast variety

of experiences due to which they are able to inculcate moral values in teens and can guide them for future

endeavors

a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)

endeavours

. To conclude, while

this

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trend has some demerits

such

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poor relationship

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poor relationships

a poor relationship

due to different thinking, instils moral values and

fulfiling

put in effect

fulfilling

children's needs are its prominent merits.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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The difference in age between parents and their children has increased compared to the past. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Fully explain your ideas

Countries should spend money on trains rather than new roads. Do you agree or disagree?

In most successful organisations, some people believe that communication between managers and workers is important, other people say that other factors are more important. What is your opinion?

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example for your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.