Some people think that sport teaches children how to compete, while others believe that children learn teamwork. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Apart from keeping us physically fit
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sports do have
certain positive impact
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a certain positive impact
on our mental health.It helps us in learning some valuable lessons in life like
team
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work
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and how to compete. Sports have a multidisciplinary impact on human life. Being a social animal and living in a competitive society like ours it’s very important to know how to
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in a
team
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and simultaneously compete with each other
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Whether someone is working in a big multinational company or thinking of some startups
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it’s the effort of the whole
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which makes it successful. Some people in our society
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believe
that sports
only teaches
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only teach
students to compete
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They believe it’s a healthy way through which children understand their strengths against competitors and
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on their
weakness
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weaknesses
.While the other part of
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society keeps a belief that sports helps in developing
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team spirit
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a team spirit
. While playing sports like football and cricket a child understands the importance of
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work
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. Some days might be challenging for
particular player
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a particular player
and in those days one understands the importance of
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the most. A
team
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with good motivation and enthusiasm will make a player to give
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best even on his worst days. In my opinion
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sports
teaches
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teach
us
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work
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as well as it generates in us the spirit to compete. One gets pushed by
ambition
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the ambition
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of
seeing his
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mate performing
good
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well
better
best
. By improving his skills he is ultimately giving benefits to his
team
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.Not only
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this but
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this, but
sports
also
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help one to relief their stress. Sports are helping
individual
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individuals
the individual
to become proficient in most prospects of their life.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • competition
  • teamwork
  • individual sports
  • team sports
  • perseverance
  • resilience
  • goals
  • support
  • responsibilities
  • social bonds
  • community
  • communicate
  • trust
  • group effort
  • balanced perspective
  • well-rounded skill set
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