In many countries, people buy a range of household goods, is it a positive or negcative development?

With the development of technology in the 21st century, more and more family
choose
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chooses
to use various
household
goods. Faced with
this
phenomenon, critics hold different ideas, I believe that the advantages overweigh the disadvantages. There are some points in
favor
promote over another
favour
of that the use of those domestic goods
are
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is
negative to people.
First
and foremost, the wastage gas like Freon let out by the air
condition
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conditioner
or other
household
goods can cause an inevitable harmful impact on the environment,
thus
leading to a series of environmental problems like global warming and
such
.
Second
, the radiation released by the domestic electronic device
are
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is
detrimental to human health
Accept space
,
,
according to the authority, the accumulated radiation from the
household
goods may even
results
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result
in the cancer.
However
, when we turn to the other side of the argument, some proponents claim that
the
people in general
they
adopt of
household
goods make life more convenient for human.
For example
, the invention of washing machine saves people’s time and energy,
thus
improving their life quality.
In addition
of
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to
that, other
household
goods like TV provides a
plantform
a raised horizontal surface
platform
for people to know more about the world, they can not only relax themselves through the TV
entrainment
an activity that is diverting and that holds the attention
entertainment
shows but
also
broaden their eyesight from the news. In conclusion,
although
there are some shortcomings related to the environment and human health.
However
, I believe those problems are balanced by the advantages.
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