Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor.What are some of the reasons for world poverty ? how can the poor be helped ?

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Poor people are found all over the globe
inspite
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in spite
of their country's development.
Foremost reason
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The foremost reason
for world
poverty
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is unemployment
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which drives many people towards the
poverty
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line. It can be resolved by improving the
employment
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opportunities. One of the reasons for global
poverty
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is unemployment
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In an economy where all the people are employed would be free from
poverty
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. Unemployment proves the inability of the government to employ all the people.Based on
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topic, there is a Tamil
flim
a form of entertainment that enacts a story by sound and a sequence of images giving the illusion of continuous movement
film
depicting the scenario of the economy during 80's.
Movie
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The movie
provides us a clear picture of four young people who suffer
poverty
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due to unemployment.The struggles they were undergoing, facing humiliations of other people and in different ways they are overcoming those has been technically
flimed
recorded on film; made into a movie
filmed
by the director.
Inspite
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In spite
of the prevailing 'World
Poverty
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' it can be reduced or completely detected from the economy through encouraging self
employment
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opportunities by providing
loan
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loans
for their business.The institutions or banks providing the loan must have track
on
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of
their business to eradicate loan waiving.In India government has
setup
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set up
a department for small and medium scale industries.Various
training
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trainings
are being provided by the technical persons to inculcate
employment
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opportunities in order to overcome
poverty
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.
Globally they
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Globally, they
are many measures taken by the government to eliminate
poverty
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.Through increasing the
employment
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opportunities by providing them necessary wages can reduce or eradicate
poverty
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.

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