Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?
As some reports state, “The features we
have naturally have
much more effect on our personality and development than other experiences that we have in our life.” Suggestion
have naturally had
This
is a controversial issue and it makes people confusing which Linking Words
one
is the major influence that affects ourselves. For me, I think both of them are important; Use synonyms
however
, experiences have Linking Words
much higher influence
on us.
Edison said, “Genius is Suggestion
a much higher influence
one
percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.” I agree with it very much. Edison had some learning problems when he was little; Use synonyms
however
, he worked very hard, trying more than 1000 kinds of bulbs and invented the most useful thing, light in our world. He experienced a Linking Words
lot
of mistakes and achieved great work. It shows that maybe he was not the smartest person, but a Use synonyms
perseverant
persistent determination
perseverance
one
. Take another Use synonyms
person
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person, for
for example
, Stanley Yan, Linking Words
one
of the hotel presidents, wasn’t a good student at school. Use synonyms
However
, he went to a delivery company to become a fundamental employee and tried his best to learn. Through a Linking Words
lot
of hard work, he became the president of the company. Afterwards, his leadership ability caught other people’s eyes; Use synonyms
thus
, he was asked to become the president of the hotel. From these examples, they prove that experience may have more influence to make people successful. After a Linking Words
lot
of stress, mistakes, and hard work, the harvest of them all are much more meaningful.
To sum up, in my opinion, the experiences you have may change your life. You can turn your weak personality or development into your strength by training yourself. Getting through a Use synonyms
lot
of experiences will make you stronger.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite