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What difficulties will your country face in the next ten years. How can these problems be overcome?

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Nowadays human beings are struggling with the number of problems. Many countries announce different-different policies to secure the future of the
country
. Everyone knows that if these problems are not solved,
then
 it will lead to the destruction of the
country
. In the following paragraph I would discuss some problems that require satisfactory solutions for the better future.
To begin
 with, In the
next
 ten years, the major problem that will faced by the
country
 is a low
level
 of the economy, which leads to other problems,
for example
 population is increasing day by day, due to low economy government will not be able to feed all the people of the
country
.
Further
, it may become the reason of poverty among the citizens of that particular
country
. Adding to
this
, unemployment might
also
 increase in upcoming years because competition
level
 is increasing every
second
. In a
country
 like India to get a job in reputed companies not a easy task. So after ten years, unemployment could reach up to another
level
.
Similarly
, in the
next
 decade, the problem of traffic will
also
 increase,
this
 thing is a directly related to the population. Due to increased number of vehicles the availability of petrol in everyone's vehicle will be not so common.
Furthermore
,
as a result
 of migration, disputes might occur in different communities which may even lead to civil war.
However
, these problems can be overcome in a simpler way,
that is
 education, if the citizens of the
country
 are educated and they know about the difficulties which people are facing these days
then
 maybe they are able to solve the problems at their own
level
.
For example
, if local people help the government to visualise the effect of industries,
then
 in future, we might not face the severely bad environmental problems. In conclusion, at present, people are facing problems in every aspect of their life.
This
 is a matter of concern. In
this
 case, education act as important weapon for all problems among the people.
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