You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs. Write a litter to your friend. In your letter ask your friend to send you cone of the photographs explain why you need that particular photograph and tell your friend what happened to your copy of it

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Dear Jass, I hope you are resting well after the long and tiring trip to Whistler

last

weekend. Honestly, we had

amazing

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time together. Actually, I am writing to you to get one of our

photograph

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which we had together. Just to

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, I am talking about that particular snap in which we were at the peak of the mountain

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full of snow around and were trying to capture

sun

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the sun

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behind us.

Although

I did get that moment

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my camera,

but

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I ponder the picture is

little

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blurry

becasue

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because

of some water on

camera

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at that time

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, I want to get the picture that you clicked

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your camera. I believe

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better than mine as I am a bad photographer anyway.

Lastly

, It would be great if you

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copy the image and

can

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send me the hard copy. I would be happy for your help. Regards Soojana

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Coherence and Cohesion

Try to separate different topics into distinct paragraphs for better readability.

Task Achievement

Check for minor grammatical errors to improve clarity.

Task Achievement

Your letter has a clear purpose and addresses all aspects of the task effectively.

Task Achievement

The tone of the letter is warm and friendly, suitable for writing to a friend.

Coherence and Cohesion

You have structured the letter with an opening and closing, maintaining a logical flow.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

154 words

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