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write about the number of people going to fast food restaurants in the years 2003 and 2006 and share your opinion

#people #food #restaurants #years
The given chart represents how
frequently
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frequent
 fast food
restraunts
a building where people go to eat
restaurants
restaurant
 were utilized by the citizens of
USA
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the USA
 in the years 2003, 2006 and 2013.The number of people are represented in terms of percentage. Overall, in all three years the percentage of people who never ate in fast food
centers
table consisting of a horizontal surface over which business is transacted
counters
centres
 were about the same.
However
 the trends show variation in other categories. The number of people who ate everyday were highest in 2003 with nearly 4% and the other two years being constant with about 1% less.A similar trend was
abserved
discovered or determined by scientific observation
observed
with
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by
 the people who never ate at these
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
 with the values being a percent higher than the regular eaters who least in the chart.The people who go just a few times a
year
 increased in 2006 from 12% to 15% and remained constant. The trends changed drastically in the people who ate once or twice a month with 2013 being the highest with 33
% followed
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%, followed
 by 2003 with 30% and
then
 the
year
 2006 with a
quater
one of four equal parts
quarter
 of people.
In
contrast number of
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contrast a number of
 citizens who went once a week in the
year
 2006 were highest with one
thirds
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third
 of
population
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the population
 and the previous
year
 being slightly less and the
next
year
 being the least with 27%.
This
 variation level was very similar to the several times a week
customers but
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customers, but
customer but
customer customer but
 the numbers were one fifth the total.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Patronage
  • Fast food consumption
  • Convenience
  • Marketing strategies
  • Lifestyle changes
  • Demographics
  • Economic factors
  • Frequency of visits
  • Health concerns
  • Public awareness
  • Menu innovations
  • Technology in food services
  • Accessibility of fast food
  • Health implications
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