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increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast-food. it is necessary for Government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Do you agree with it?

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Nowadays, an increasing number of
health
 concerns attributed to excessive consumption of fast
food
 are climbing in the whole society.
Consequently
, whether the Government should levy higher tax on junk
food
 or not is now a protracted debate. Personally,
this
 methodology has not proven effective in solving the problem. As can be seen that higher taxation on ready-to-eat meals will definitely elevate their price as a compensation for maintaining the turnover of those
fast-
food
 stores. As a matter of fact,
this
 can just discourage the intake of lower income
groups but
Accept comma addition
groups, but
 not those who are
previleged
blessed with privileges
privileged
 consumers.
Hence
,
this
 is not considered as a long-term solution.
In addition
,
this
 can tremendously inflicts trading activities of a store, as tax payment increases while profit records a
possibly
Suggestion
possible
 steep decline due to decreasing
food
 demand. From what has been discussed, it is vital that the Government work out other more feasible and effective strategies with a view to decreasing the potential
health
 risks brought about by fatty and sugar-rich
food
. There should be a campaign of long-term effects of
fast-
food
 to enhance people's knowledge. More specifically, it can result in a higher proportion of obesity, cardiovascular diseases.
In addition
, labelling
such
health
 problems warnings on products seems to be an effective solution which is successfully implemented in different countries and San Fransico is a telling example. In conclusion,
inposing
Suggestion
in pursuing
in posing
in pushing
 a higher tax on
fast-
food
 is just a temporary and money-consuming solution and
thus
, faces a number of community assistance and criticism. Along with some drastic measures from the Government, everyone should
eqquiped
Suggestion
equip
equipped
occupied
 themselves with deep understanding of
fast-
food
 drawbacks and regulate their eating
pratices
a customary way of operation or behavior
practices
 to maintain a wealthy
health
.

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