in many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.

In various nations around the
world
, the average age
are rising
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is rising
magnificently. The essay will address the positive aspect and the demerit of the given issue and be concluded by my personal opinion.
Firstly
, the benefit of increased life expectancy is old people can be useful.
As a result
, our life pace
are
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is
really fast, we don’t have time to do something is not necessary like housework, take care for your child. Our parent can contribute the time to help you. By way of example, they can look after our children or they can be an impressive story teller by telling fairy tales, folk tale,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
In addition
,
old
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older
people can
also
lead a society. Nowadays, almost nations need a rich-experienced people who know about the economic situation, good at diplomacy to lead their country for a better future, for the economic growth.
For instance
, USA –
the most strongest
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the strongest
nation in the
world
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led by Donald Trump. He is almost 73 years old with an excellent knowledge about the
world
economic
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economy
economies
, an outstanding president.
However
, increasing the average age will causes
over population
too much population
overpopulation
. There will be no place to live. The default for the elderly is a social burden.
For example
, China – the most populous nation, their living standard is really
high but
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high, but
there are still
remain
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remains
poor people that can’t afford to pay for it. In Hongkong, everything is expensive
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also
the house rent
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)
so people choose to live in
a
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an
extremely small apartment.
Moreover
,
this
problem can cause air pollution.
As a result
, the amount of vehicles and industry are increasing as the number of
people growth
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a person's growth
person's growth
. The more vehicles are used, the more gas will be
release
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released
to the atmosphere. Air pollution
also
causes
lungs
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lung
disease. By way of example, in India, air pollution is increasing rapidly because the use of vehicles, industries,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
… released the gas into the air so there will be more and more grime. In summary, the disadvantages of the increase of life expectancy outweigh the advantages. While the
world
is developing
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is developed
by the leaders of each country, the pollutions, over population problems will continued happen and we have to find another solution to solve
this
issue.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life expectancy
  • demographics
  • societal development
  • healthcare system
  • pension funds
  • multigenerational
  • workforce
  • economic sustainability
  • intergenerational inequality
  • longevity
  • proactive policy
  • geriatrics
  • senior citizens
  • ageing population
  • fertility rates
  • dependency ratio
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