ultures all around world have become more similar than they used to be. What are reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative?

Nowadays, worldwide’ art, music, and literature have the resemblance between one another, in comparison to decades ago.
This
essay will discuss
further
the reasons and impact of
this
behaviour. The rise of online platforms and applications have raised tremendously, as e-social media
such
as Twitter, Instagram and Facebook, allow everyone to connect, discuss and express their knowledge or opinions ope
nly to
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open
openness
all people around the world.
For instance
, the Korean music that was introduced
initially
in early 2000 through YouTube platform, caused the global phenomenon of weird and funky types of music.
This
resulted to
so
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in
me of the western countries (U.S.A and U.K) mus
icians to
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Musicians
copy their movements, actions and style in order to cat
er what the au
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cater to what the
dience wants.
Hence
, technology plays a crucial part in the increase of cul
ture si
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cultural
milarity on earth.
Furthermore
, ‘The Economist’ magazine stated that the rise of global cultural resemblance has brought positivity towards humanity. The fact that people have become less racists, less jud
gemental an
depending on judgment
judgmental
d more open to oth
er genders an
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the other genders
d religions, wer
e th
In or at or to what place
where
e main effect due to cultural likeness.
This
is because, people are likely to understand and learn of others’ differences, and adapt their uniqueness quickly.
Moreover
, humans are equal and should not be differentiated based on their cul
tures or
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culture
ethnicity.
Therefore
, cul
ture si
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cultural
milarity has brought positive impacts towards people in
this
planet. In conclusion, the internet has definitely caused the cultures likeness in
this
world and I believe that it brings positive impacts towards hum
anity
Accept comma addition
humanity, such
such
as an increase in open minded people, decrease in racisms and jud
gemental in
depending on judgment
judgmental
dividuals.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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