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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and Clean Energy. The benefits of nuclear energy far outweigh the advantages to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The world gets peace because of nuclear weapons development. The Nuclear
power
 station gives us environmental friendly
energy
. There are a number of advantages compared
to
being one more than one
two
 disadvantages. I think nuclear
power
 has more negative
result
Suggestion
resulted
 on society than positive. To support my opinion, I will discuss both pros and cons of nuclear
power
.
Firstly
, nowadays people produces most of
energy
 from fossil fuels by burning non renewable resources. We contribute
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
 the destruction of our planet.
Moreover
,
this
 trend
also
 increases a global warming.
Similarly
, to manage nuclear
power
 plant is
also
 a challenge because little wrong functioning will become the reason of great disaster.
For example
, in 2010 Tsunami stuck in the
power
 plant (in japan) and because of
this
 there was a huge explosion that scene of casualties was a very horrible.
Furthermore
, the countries having superpowers of nuclear are threatening underdeveloped countries by using nuclear weapons and it could cut the relation between two neighbouring countries. If we talk about the merits of nuclear
power
 than one thing will come in our mind
that is
 less expensive and clean
energy
for
Suggestion
from
 the environment. Due to the rapid use of fossil fuels, we could face the problems in the future, but if humans use nuclear
power
 as an alternative source of
energy
 we can overcome the future problem. Adding to
this
, some countries could not have coal and crude oil they would use a nuclear to generate the
power
 for the industries. In conclusion, with no doubt I can say that nuclear
power
 has more demerits in comparison with its benefits. It affects the natural system of the universe and spoil the vital relationship between mankind and ecological balance.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nuclear deterrence
  • geopolitical stability
  • nuclear disarmament
  • carbon emissions
  • renewable energy sources
  • radioactive waste
  • cost-effectiveness
  • nuclear proliferation
  • fossil fuel dependence
  • nuclear fallout
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