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It is becoming increasingly expensive for museums to be open to the public. What would be the best solution to keep them open, in your opinion?

#museums
In
this
 modern era, museums are becoming more expensive for
general public
Suggestion
the general public
.
Although
, it is essential to
considere
deem to be
consider
 that museum entrance cost, but these days its
cost
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costs
 going to be not affordable for
middle class
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the middle class
. From my point of view, I will explain three different
solution
Suggestion
solutions
 depends on
this
 statement.
Firstly
, museums authority
should be think
Suggestion
should be thought
 regarding public benefits, because without visitors they cannot establish their business in any sectors. If they will consider the
ectrance
something that provides access (to get in or get out)
entrance
 fees, they will more beneficial
in
Suggestion
to
 their business.
For example
, London
museaum
a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
museum
 is totally open for public, even though the authority is
cocacola
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coca cola
.
Secondly
, business man should help on sponsorship, because there are least of possibility for others. Even
therefore
,
private company
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private companies
a private company
 can easily advertise their brand in front of the visitors and it is the best way to earn more money for them.
Finally
, it cannot be handed over to
private company
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a private company
private companies
 in any ways. All the people are paying
taxt
the words of something written
text
tax
 to
government
in particular
 sectors, so
government
 should create a fund for public facilities
such
 as for
museum
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the museum
a museum
museums
.
For instance
, in USA
government
 gives twenty five percent fee for for public entrance,
that
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that's
 why people can visit their heritage museums without fees.
In addition
, middle class people nowadays cannot much visit
museum
Suggestion
the museum
 because of the high cost rate of ticket,
as a result
 children are going to despoil for their heritage. Hampering in their general Knowledge,
for instance
. In conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that if private authorities and
government
 make a collaboration
then
 people will be more beneficial. They will be more encouraged to go to
museam
a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
museums
.

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