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Some people think that having people from different nationalities and cultural background living together in the same country makes the country develop faster. Do you agree?

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Cultural diversity is thought to result in faster development of the nation as thought by some people. I completely agree with
this
view point
a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoint
.
Firstly
, the communities coming from different countries bring diverse ideas along with them. These ideas help in the progression of the
country
 in all fields.
For example
, with the settlement of more Chinese communities has resulted in
greater advancement
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the greater advancement
 in technology and science in Pakistan.
Therefore
, citizens are more aware of different types of technological advancement outside Pakistan.
Secondly
, when people from different backgrounds live together, they become more tolerant towards
eachother
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each other
.
As a
result it
Accept comma addition
result, it
 gives them the snapshot of the different ethnicities outside their
country
. It provides
better understanding
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a better understanding
 of their certain
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
.
Therefore
, more resources are spent in the development of the
country
 rather than resolving the conflicts in the
work place
a place where work is done
workplace
.
Finally
, these
culturally
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cultural
culture
 diverse groups promote the tourism which forms the base income of many countries.
For example
, countries like Malaysia and Thailand generate their maximum income for the tourist industry.
This
 helps in establishing a better image of the
country
 across the world.
Moreover
, these people
also
 help in the promotion of trade with different countries which helps establish a better economy since the flow of money in and out of the
country
 stabilizes the financial status of any nation. To conclude, I believe that heterogeneous communities are much more successful as compared to homogeneous ones as they help in faster development.
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