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Today people are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are the disadvantages more than the advantages of such services?

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By taking the help of
translation
 services, nowadays masses can break the barriers of communication between the different types of languages. In recent times, most of the folks like to use online applications for
translation
 purposes in that
situation it
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situation, it
 has many
advantages but
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advantages, but
 somehow it has disadvantages too,
however
, I believe that its advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
Translation
 services are beneficial to the people of different cultures as it helps them to read literature which has been written in different languages. Apart from that,
translation
 services are currently helping millions of students who are aspiring to become experts in their particular field by enabling them to read journals and books published in various languages.
For example
, we can now read many books of science online which are originally written in other languages.
Moreover
, it comes in to aid the tourists who can understand the meaning of the different languages by just scanning or typing words of other languages without actually learning them and by doing
this
 they can communicate easily with native people. To cite an example, foreigners coming in India
uses
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use
 google translate to communicate with Indian locals. On sharp contrast,
translation
 software sometimes is not accurate which creates problem to comprehend the language and meanings of words sometimes are not displayed correctly.
Besides
this
, to do some
translation
 one requires a stable
internet
 connection and a smart device like a computer or
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the internet
 which might not be possible everywhere to avail both of
services
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the services
.
For example
, many of the villages of India are not connected with
internet
 services so at that moment communicate with others might not be possible for a foreigner without the
internet
. To conclude,
translation
 of the languages is a good service. It has some drawbacks, albeit I think its benefits are more helpful to society compared to its demerits.
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