Some people prefer to buy food in a supermarket, others prefer to do their food shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

With the presence of the
succesful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
developments of the internet, the
food
industries have been drastically modified in the
last
10 years. It has become more and more convenient for consumers to purchase
food
: the
appearence
outward or visible aspect of a person or thing
appearance
of supermarket chains
such
as Target and Wall Mart and now
to
Suggestion
with
the introduction of online
shoping
searching for or buying goods or services
shopping
- which give their customers an even wider range of products to choose from. As attractive as
this
new service is, a great number of people still prefer to buy
food
in supermarkets. In a survey conducted by Dr. Jackson Anagonye on customer attitude towards online shopping for
food
, the most
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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