You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

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Life is

long travel

Suggestion

a long travel

of different situations

Accept space

Many people claim that to accept difficult situations while others says to cope up and find solutions

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From my point of view, people should put

effort no

Accept comma addition

effort, no

matter whether it gets succeed or not some or the other day will get

good

Suggestion

better

result.

Firstly

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life is unpredictable, consist of ups and downs

Accept space

For instance

, not satisfied with

job

Suggestion

the job

a job

Accept space

to avoid these desperate situations better to keep mind motivated. Never accept it as

Suggestion

failure

try

Suggestion

tries

to search for acceptable workplace which

Inturn

Suggestion

In turn

enhances to cope up with difficult situations,

Secondly

, acceptance failure in life causes detrimental effect

Accept space

One who is mentally strong can withstand all circumstances

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

119 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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