Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress?

Recent advancements in technology
has changed
Suggestion
have changed
our lives in
unprecedented manner
Suggestion
an unprecedented manner
the unprecedented manner
. Tasks
such
as cleaning dishes or communicating via computers has become very easy, which was earlier considered to be very tedious and
time
taking work. Whereas, some people support an argument that it is making our life more difficult. My essay below will delineate, how automated devices are changing our life in
positive manner
Suggestion
a positive manner
. In earlier times, people used to waste lots of their important
time
in completing basic household things like washing dishes by hand or perhaps cleaning house manually. Before the invention of mobile phones or computers, people use to communicate via Postal services, which could take even months to deliver sometimes.
Furthermore
, at the end of the day, person engaged in all the non-crucial activities left with no energy for more engagements. People left with no personal
time
and might end up feeling overburdened.
However
, with
introduction
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the introduction
of automated devices, things which took hours to complete earlier, now can complete in minutes.
For instance
, if we need to communicate to someone, we can call them directly
instead
of writing
letter
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letters
to them and post it via vintage postal services. The
time
saved by
this
transformation can be utilized in various crucial things
such
as doing anything productive in your job or perhaps you can utilize
this
spare timing following your passion or learning anything new. In conclusion, I want to pen
down saying
Accept comma addition
down, saying
that, automated devices are helping us in all aspects and are playing key role in saving our
time
and energy and are leading us to progressive and prosperous future.
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