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Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development?

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Recent advancements in technology have changed the world in an unprecedented manner. Not only adults, children are
also
 affected by
this
 modernization. Children these days prefer to play games online rather than stepping out to play sports. In my opinion, I consider
this
 as bad growth, due to its adverse effects on growth of youth.
First
 and foremost, parents these days provide their off springs with electronic gadgets at
very young age
Suggestion
a very young age
, due to which they develop a habit of living in a virtual environment rather than making physical connections.
Moreover
, playing games online has bad effect on their eyes and may lead to various diseases like making a person insomniac. A recent survey of New York times shows that the percentage of obesity is more in children playing online games is 50% higher than those who opt for Outdoor activities. Parents play a vital role in the upbringing of their little ones. Guardians should encourage their younger ones to choose sports over online games as it has many benefits, like getting indulged in any physical activity makes you fit, both physically and mentally.
Furthermore
, one can choose sports as a full-time profession as well. It is anticipated that, success ratio of people involved in any physical activity is much higher than those who do not like to follow any physical practice. In my opinion, I pen down, saying that parents should foster and provide
conducive environment
Suggestion
a conducive environment
 for kids to indulge more in sports as if people of
nation
Suggestion
a nation
the nation
 are fit and healthy,
then
 they will help more in the progress of
country
Suggestion
the country
a country
.
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