Many people love to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

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Today most

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Today, most

of the people prefer to wear different styles of clothes. Unlike the early

years many

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years, many

shops have been increased and the people who are doing shopping

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have become higher

comparing

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compared

comparable

to past years.

I believe wearing

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I believe in wearing

fashionable clothes is a good thing as that will make a

person

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more attractive and as well as well-mannered.I

have noticed

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notice

today's world, clothing is taking a huge role of the image of a

person

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's dignity and respect. So if people who are wearing stylish

cloths

clothing in general

clothes

only considered as respectable people in the society.As my experience, I have seen even in some shops, people who are wearing stylish

cloths

clothing in general

clothes

get more attention than the others from

there

of them or themselves

their

service officers.So

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is how

today

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today's

todays

society.

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Therefore wearing

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Therefore, wearing

nice clothes are really essential in

this

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society.

However

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wearing stylish

cloths

clothing in general

clothes

can be a bad thing as well.If a

person

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doesn't know what to wear, in which situation, that will lead to a negative impact.As an

example if

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example, if

person

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trying to wear fancy clothes

in to

expresses motion to a point on, or within, something

into

a funeral

place

the rate of moving (especially walking or running)

pace

, obviously it is not suitable.So

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every cloths should be wear according to the occasion.And

also

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wearing these kind of

cloths

clothing in general

clothes

can be bad impact for especially for the women.There are bad people who cannot control themselves by seeing the woman wearing stylish

cloths

clothing in general

clothes

might be very short or

more tight

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tighter

to the body.

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will

course

give rise to; cause to happen or occur, not always intentionally

cause

choose

to sexual harassment, which is the main bad effect from the stylish

cloths

clothing in general

clothes

. My point of view is, even though there are both positive and negative

effect

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effects

from wearing these stylish cloths

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to all these impacts, responsible the people are the ones who are wearing them.If people know how to choose their

cloths according

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cloths, according

to the place and

also

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if they know the real purpose of wearing

cloths

clothing in general

clothes

, wearing stylish

cloths

clothing in general

clothes

will never be a problem in future

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without hesitating all the people either male or female, or either young or old can wear them

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

324 words

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