A significant number of people believe that some professions require individuals to be more truthful than other types of professions. What is your viewpoint? Why are some professionals in certain jobs viewed as being more truthful than others?

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Truthfullness

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Truthfulness

is one of the important

quality

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qualities

of any human being. From childhood

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are taught to be truthful in all aspects and daily life. In my

viewpoint certain

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viewpoint, certain

professions

hide

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Hide

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truth

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the truth

from their clients based on the

situation

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. Certain professions

such

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as marketing professionals have to hide the full

truth

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from his clients in order to achieve his target and make his company profitable. It's not necessary to lie to the client

always

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always, however

however

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its purely based on

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situation

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the situation

. If the client

is too much demanding

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too much demands

on the capability of the sales person

then

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the

sales person

a person employed to represent a business and to sell its merchandise (as to customers in a store or to customers who are visited)

salesperson

has no choice other than hiding the part of the

truth

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from the client. Other professions

such

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as doctors need to be truthful with their patients. When a doctor

find

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finds

his

patient

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with a critical

illness he

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illness, he

has to reveal the

truth

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to his

patient

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or to his immediate family members. There could be a reason the

patient

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will live for six months if he is in advanced stage of blood cancer, if the doctor hides the

truth

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to his

patient

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there could be a very chaotic

situation

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in the family if

critically illed

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the critical old patient

critically old patient

critical old patient

critical illed patient

patient

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dies suddenly.

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kind of professions demands to be truthful with their clients. Teachers need to be truthful with his students

otherwise

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the dishonesty will be passed to the pupils and the

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generation will be dishonest in their profession, which is a very bad for any country. On the whole it would be more beneficial to be more truthful as we can,

however

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part of the

truth

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can be hidden when the

situation

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demands.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

268 words

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A significant number of people believe that some professions require individuals to be more truthful than other types of professions. What is your viewpoint? Why are some professionals in certain jobs viewed as being more truthful than others?

Fully explain your ideas

Rich countries should allow jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employers who are from poor countries. Do you agree or disagree.

Scientists have been warning for many years about protecting the environment and that people must limit the use of energy in their daily lives. Despite warnings, many people do not do so. What are the reasons for this and how can people be encouraged to protect the environment?

The picture below shows the difference in the layout of the conference centre in 2010 and 2025.

Some people think that to learn about other countries, they need to travel. Some say that it is not necessary to travel; we can have information through TV and the Internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.