Some people think that people should choose their job based on income in order to provide security for their family. Do you think money is important factor when choosing job? What other factors should be considered?

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IT IS TRUE THAT
JOB
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ALWAYS GIVES A FINANCIAL STABILITY TO AN INDIVIDUAL AND THEIR FAMILY. FEW BELIEVE THAT SALARY SHOULD BE CONSIDER AS PART OF SELECTING CRITERIA WHEN SEARCHING FOR A
JOB
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. THE FOLLOWING ESSAY WILL DISCUSS THAT MONEY IS NOT ALWAYS ESSENTIAL FACTOR DURING SELECTING PROCEDURE SPECIALLY FOR YOUR
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JOB
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OFFER. AND
PERSON
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SHOULD LOOK FOR OTHER CRITERIA TOO LIKE, PASSION,
INTEREST
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, WORK HOURS AND SO ON.
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OF ALL, MONEY IS NOT IMPORTANT AS ALWAYS DUE TO VARIOUS REASONS.
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, WHEN A
PERSON
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IS LOOKING FOR A WORK AS ENTRY LEVE
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THAT
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HE SHOULD CONSIDER THE OFFER AS AN OPPORTUNITY RATHER THAN LOOKING FOR WAGES. TO ELABORATE, WHEN YOU LOOK FOR
PAY
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WHEN SELECTING WORK,
PERSON
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WILL END UP WITH SEARCHING A
JOB
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FOR LOGER PERIOD OF
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BY WASTING THE PRECIOUS
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.
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IT IS DEPENDS ON THE POSITION YOUR ARE APPLYING FOR AND THE WORK TYPE.
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, IT IS TRUE THAT AFTER 1 YEAR OF EXPERIENCE YOU SHOULD GET A GOOD
PAY
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WHEN APPLYING FOR HIGHER POSITION. IN THE ADDITION TO
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, THERE ARE SEVERAL FACTORS WHICH SHOULD BE IN CONSIDER FOR
JOB
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SELCTION. THE PRIME FSCTOR IS THAT ONE SHOULD LOOK FOR
INTEREST
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AND PASSION FOR WORK. TO ILLUSTRATE, PERSONN OFTEN ACHIEVE A LOT WHE WORK HAS DONE WITH
INTEREST
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.
AS A RESULT
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INCREASE THE CHANCE OF PROMOTION AND
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AUTOMATICALLY ONE GETS A HIGHER
PAY
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. FOR AN EXAMPLE ONE OF MY FRIEND WANTED TO WORK FOR A PART
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JUST TO GAIN SOME KOWLEDGE AND MAKE NEW FRIEND SO HE JOINED MACDONALDS RESTAURANT AS ENTRY LEVEL OSTION AND WITHING 3 MONTHS HE BECAME A ASSISTANT MANAGER IN THE SAME STORE.
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IS HAPPENED BECAUSE HE WAS VERY ENTHUISIASTIC AND HARD WORKING AND HAVE PERSONAL
INTEREST
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IN THE FOOD CHAIN BUSINESS.
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, HE GOT SUCCESS. TO SUM UP, OVERALL IT SHOULD DEPEND ON THE
PERSON
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'S PERSONAL CHOICE BUT I BELIEVE IS THAT, WITH STRONG WORK ETHICS AND CURIOSITY TO LEARN MORE DEFINATLY GIVES YOU AN HIGER
PAY
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. BUT AT
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MONEY SHOULD NOT BE A FUNDAMENTAL NEEDS EXCEPT FOR NEEDY PEOPLE.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial stability
  • job satisfaction
  • fulfillment
  • mental health
  • aligns with
  • productive career
  • career progression
  • growth potential
  • work-life balance
  • flexible hours
  • telecommuting
  • vacation time
  • professional responsibilities
  • working environment
  • corporate culture
  • toxic environment
  • stress and burnout
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