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Some people think that people should choose their job based on income in order to provide security for their family. Do you think money is important factor when choosing job? What other factors should be considered?

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IT IS TRUE THAT
JOB
 ALWAYS GIVES A FINANCIAL STABILITY TO AN INDIVIDUAL AND THEIR FAMILY. FEW BELIEVE THAT SALARY SHOULD BE CONSIDER AS PART OF SELECTING CRITERIA WHEN SEARCHING FOR A
JOB
. THE FOLLOWING ESSAY WILL DISCUSS THAT MONEY IS NOT ALWAYS ESSENTIAL FACTOR DURING SELECTING PROCEDURE SPECIALLY FOR YOUR
FIRST
JOB
 OFFER. AND
PERSON
 SHOULD LOOK FOR OTHER CRITERIA TOO LIKE, PASSION,
INTEREST
, WORK HOURS AND SO ON.
FIRST
 OF ALL, MONEY IS NOT IMPORTANT AS ALWAYS DUE TO VARIOUS REASONS.
FIRSTLY
, WHEN A
PERSON
 IS LOOKING FOR A WORK AS ENTRY LEVE
THEN
 THAT
TIME
 HE SHOULD CONSIDER THE OFFER AS AN OPPORTUNITY RATHER THAN LOOKING FOR WAGES. TO ELABORATE, WHEN YOU LOOK FOR
PAY
 WHEN SELECTING WORK,
PERSON
 WILL END UP WITH SEARCHING A
JOB
 FOR LOGER PERIOD OF
TIME
 BY WASTING THE PRECIOUS
TIME
.
THUS
 IT IS DEPENDS ON THE POSITION YOUR ARE APPLYING FOR AND THE WORK TYPE.
HOWEVER
, IT IS TRUE THAT AFTER 1 YEAR OF EXPERIENCE YOU SHOULD GET A GOOD
PAY
 WHEN APPLYING FOR HIGHER POSITION. IN THE ADDITION TO
THIS
, THERE ARE SEVERAL FACTORS WHICH SHOULD BE IN CONSIDER FOR
JOB
 SELCTION. THE PRIME FSCTOR IS THAT ONE SHOULD LOOK FOR
INTEREST
 AND PASSION FOR WORK. TO ILLUSTRATE, PERSONN OFTEN ACHIEVE A LOT WHE WORK HAS DONE WITH
INTEREST
.
AS A RESULT
 INCREASE THE CHANCE OF PROMOTION AND
THEN
 AUTOMATICALLY ONE GETS A HIGHER
PAY
. FOR AN EXAMPLE ONE OF MY FRIEND WANTED TO WORK FOR A PART
TIME
 JUST TO GAIN SOME KOWLEDGE AND MAKE NEW FRIEND SO HE JOINED MACDONALDS RESTAURANT AS ENTRY LEVEL OSTION AND WITHING 3 MONTHS HE BECAME A ASSISTANT MANAGER IN THE SAME STORE.
THIS
 IS HAPPENED BECAUSE HE WAS VERY ENTHUISIASTIC AND HARD WORKING AND HAVE PERSONAL
INTEREST
 IN THE FOOD CHAIN BUSINESS.
HENCE
, HE GOT SUCCESS. TO SUM UP, OVERALL IT SHOULD DEPEND ON THE
PERSON
'S PERSONAL CHOICE BUT I BELIEVE IS THAT, WITH STRONG WORK ETHICS AND CURIOSITY TO LEARN MORE DEFINATLY GIVES YOU AN HIGER
PAY
. BUT AT
FIRST
 MONEY SHOULD NOT BE A FUNDAMENTAL NEEDS EXCEPT FOR NEEDY PEOPLE.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial stability
  • job satisfaction
  • fulfillment
  • mental health
  • aligns with
  • productive career
  • career progression
  • growth potential
  • work-life balance
  • flexible hours
  • telecommuting
  • vacation time
  • professional responsibilities
  • working environment
  • corporate culture
  • toxic environment
  • stress and burnout
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