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Being a celebrity- such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

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To be a famous personality,
for instance
 a movie actor or a prominent name in the sports world; has its merits and demerits. Having fame brings
money but
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money, but
 it requires extreme fitness. According to me, it brings more difficulties rather than ease in the
life
. Earning a name in the glamour world gives opportunities to make huge amounts of
money
. With that
money
 one can buy expensive goods and live a
life
 of luxury.
For example
, John Rambo; before becoming famous, he had to sell his dog because he could not afford to feed
him but
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him, but
 once he became famous from the movie “Rocky”, he started earning really good
money
 and now he has millions of dollars and enjoys an amazing
life
 which a common person can only dream of. Contrary to that, to be famous requires
extreme level
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extreme levels
an extreme level
 of fitness.
Weather
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Whether
 it is glamour world
or
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of
 sports, an individual has to look very good and be in proper shape which usually requires extreme diets and regular workout with fitness trainers.
For instance
, Rubi Hassan; a prominent actress in
Pakistani film industry
Suggestion
the Pakistani film industry
, gained weight after being successful for a few years. Now, no one is willing to work with her because she has not been able to control her obesity and is not in good shape anymore.
Moreover
, one does not have a private
life
 anymore because of the media.
Finally
, in my opinion; being an eye candy, it brings more issues in comparison to the benefits that it offers.
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