People tend to believe that all young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work for the good of the community. Do you agree or disagree?

It is commonly believed that young people should undertake social responsibility activities in order to play their

part

in

society

.

it

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It

is

encouraged specially

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encouraged, especially

encouraged especially

for young people to help people through different activities.

this

Suggestion

This

certainly has good impact over

society

overall but

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overall, but

it is said to have some demerits too.

To begin

with, young people

now a days

the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech

nowadays

are so encircled in their routine life that social responsibility factor is almost neglected.

it

Suggestion

It

is pivotal for youth to take out time from their busy schedule & play their

part

. Not all the activities are done for the monetary or non-monetary benefit. Youth can perform certain activities that

helps

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help

common people. To elucidate it

further

youth should take

part

in charitable activities

such

as raising funds for orphan or planting trees that will eventually benefit everyone in the

society

.

Also there

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Also, there

are certain trust schools that

offers

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offer

career

counseling

something that provides direction or advice as to a decision or course of action

counselling

for students. Young people can participate in those

counseling

something that provides direction or advice as to a decision or course of action

counselling

sessions to pave the way for children to help them

chose

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choose

their right career. Sparing

two three

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two, three

to three

to to three

hours a week is not a bad choice in order to pay back to

society

that we live in.

On the contrary

, some believe that it has some drawbacks as well,

such

as these activities will distract young people from their original life goal or it may bring imbalance in their routine life activities that are obligatory to perform.

well

(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')

Well

, these petty issues can certainly be taken care

off

connects a noun with the preceding word

of

if one is persistent to play its

part

for social benefits. To recapitulate, it is very much essential now a days for youth to spare time for social activities to help common people in order to stick to their roots & traditions.

Also

for a healthy

society

, young people are the core pillar that everyone relies upon & they should be playing active roles in making

society

better

everyday

Suggestion

every day

.