All the people in a company should be treated equally and provide with the same number of holidays in a year or people doing different jobs enjoy different amount of holiday time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Equality reduce the gap between
peoples
standard. Companies should be treated all Suggestion
people's
peoples'
employee
in a same Suggestion
employees
way
Accept comma addition
way, such
such
as grant same amount of holidays in a year. I, holistically, disagree with this
viewpoint, because people doing job in different posts or groups so holidays should be depend
on Suggestion
should depend
occupation
.
To begin
with, people do different work
in companies. Work
is depend on people
posts and their Suggestion
peoples
peoples'
person's
work
ability. For instance
, highest post
employees Suggestion
postal
work
is differ from lowest post
employee. For that reason, in a
organization people Suggestion
an
can not
be treated equally because can not
cannot
work
is divided on their Suggestion
the work
occupation
Accept comma addition
occupation, such
such
as manager
of the company
has a different role
as compared to other post
in
Suggestion
on
same community
. Suggestion
the same community
Thus
, the same number of holidays can not be provided in same company
colleagues because every individual represent
a different Suggestion
represents
role
and work
in company
. So, Suggestion
a company
the company
holiday
can be based on employees Suggestion
a holiday
holidays
work
need.
Moreover
, the owner of the every company
firstly
would be planned of the work
regarding to achiving
a profit in a specific time period. to gain with effort
achieving
For example
, job work
based on different posts such
as manager
occupation
, secretary post
and many more. For that reason, constant amount of holidays cannot Grant in the staff of the company
. Thus
, work
is based on different Suggestion
the work
occupation
Accept comma addition
occupation, such
such
as security guard
of the Suggestion
a security guard
company
perform their job daily because it is very crucial for company
safety as well as manager profession
of the Suggestion
the manager profession
a manager profession
company
also
very vital because manager
role
is like a professional skilled role
in the company
. So, that is
why holidays of employee vary from other workers.
To conclude, in a same organization holiday should be grant
to employees on the based of Suggestion
granted
there
posts and their of them or themselves
their
work
needed for company
. Companies Suggestion
the company
should be give
holidays to their staff on their urgent personal issues.Suggestion
should give
should be given
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