All the people in a company should be treated equally and provide with the same number of holidays in a year or people doing different jobs enjoy different amount of holiday time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Equality reduce the gap between
peoples
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people's
peoples'
standard. Companies should be treated all
employee
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employees
in a same
way
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way, such
such
as grant same amount of holidays in a year. I, holistically, disagree with
this
viewpoint, because people doing job in different posts or groups so holidays
should be depend
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should depend
on
occupation
.
To begin
with, people do different
work
in companies.
Work
is depend on
people
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peoples
peoples'
person's
posts and their
work
ability.
For instance
, highest
post
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postal
employees
work
is differ from lowest
post
employee. For that reason, in
a
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an
organization people
can not
can not
cannot
be treated equally because
work
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the work
is divided on their
occupation
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occupation, such
such
as
manager
of the
company
has a different
role
as compared to other
post
in
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on
same community
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the same community
.
Thus
, the same number of holidays can not be provided in same
company
colleagues because every individual
represent
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represents
a different
role
and
work
in
company
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a company
the company
. So,
holiday
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a holiday
holidays
can be based on employees
work
need.
Moreover
, the owner of the every
company
firstly
would be planned of the
work
regarding to
achiving
to gain with effort
achieving
a profit in a specific time period.
For example
, job
work
based on different posts
such
as
manager
occupation
, secretary
post
and many more. For that reason, constant amount of holidays cannot Grant in the staff of the
company
.
Thus
,
work
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the work
is based on different
occupation
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occupation, such
such
as
security guard
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a security guard
of the
company
perform their job daily because it is very crucial for
company
safety as well as
manager profession
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the manager profession
a manager profession
of the
company
also
very vital because
manager
role
is like a professional skilled
role
in the
company
. So,
that is
why holidays of employee vary from other workers. To conclude, in a same organization holiday should be
grant
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granted
to employees on the based of
there
of them or themselves
their
posts and their
work
needed for
company
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the company
. Companies
should be give
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should give
should be given
holidays to their staff on their urgent personal issues.

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