All the people in a company should be treated equally and provide with the same number of holidays in a year or people doing different jobs enjoy different amount of holiday time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Equality reduce the gap between
peoples
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people's
peoples'
standard. Companies should be treated all
employee
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employees
in a same
way
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way, such
such
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as grant same amount of holidays in a year. I, holistically, disagree with
this
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viewpoint, because people doing job in different posts or groups so holidays
should be depend
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should depend
on
occupation
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.
To begin
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with, people do different
work
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in companies.
Work
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is depend on
people
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peoples
peoples'
person's
posts and their
work
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ability.
For instance
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, highest
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post
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postal
employees
work
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is differ from lowest
post
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employee. For that reason, in
a
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an
organization people
can not
can not
cannot
be treated equally because
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work
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the work
is divided on their
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occupation
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occupation, such
such
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as
manager
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of the
company
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has a different
role
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as compared to other
post
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in
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on
same community
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the same community
.
Thus
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, the same number of holidays can not be provided in same
company
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colleagues because every individual
represent
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represents
a different
role
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and
work
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in
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company
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a company
the company
. So,
holiday
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a holiday
holidays
can be based on employees
work
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need.
Moreover
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, the owner of the every
company
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firstly
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would be planned of the
work
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regarding to
achiving
to gain with effort
achieving
a profit in a specific time period.
For example
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, job
work
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based on different posts
such
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as
manager
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occupation
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, secretary
post
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and many more. For that reason, constant amount of holidays cannot Grant in the staff of the
company
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.
Thus
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,
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work
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the work
is based on different
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occupation
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occupation, such
such
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as
security guard
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a security guard
of the
company
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perform their job daily because it is very crucial for
company
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safety as well as
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manager profession
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the manager profession
a manager profession
of the
company
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also
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very vital because
manager
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role
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is like a professional skilled
role
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in the
company
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. So,
that is
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why holidays of employee vary from other workers. To conclude, in a same organization holiday should be
grant
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granted
to employees on the based of
there
of them or themselves
their
posts and their
work
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needed for
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company
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the company
. Companies
should be give
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should give
should be given
holidays to their staff on their urgent personal issues.

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