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In many countries people are living in a "throwaway society" where things are used for a short time and thrown away. What are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to?

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In Many continents and regions people are staying in a
use
 and throw society, in which different things are being used for a short
time
 and throwing away.
This
 essay will discuss the root causes, including Lack of
time
, availability of
Use
 and throw products and problems associated with it
such
 as damage to
then
 environment and cost incurred
on
Suggestion
by
 customers. It has become mandatory for both wife and husband to work to meet the growing needs of luxurious life. Due to which, people are not getting enough
time
 to prepare or do anything which takes relatively high
time
. More and more firms are manufacturing goods and food items which come with short durability and less costly.
For instance
, In my family we are more inclined towards buying used and throw items which are widely available in the market because myself and my wife are leading a very busy life. There are several serious problems with
this
 recent trend.
Firstly
, Short
time
 usage products can cause severe problems to the environment, because it is obvious that
such
 things are made with low quality raw materials.
For instance
,
use
 and throw plastic toys are made with degraded quality plastic, which will have a severe dent on global ecosystem.
Also
, with
use
 and throw approach people spend money recursively to busy same item again and again. Since durability of
such
 products is very short, there would be no option to customer other than buying them again.
For instance
, I spend lots of money everything on
use
 and throw plastic bags. To conclude, "
Use
 and throw away" approach has several problems
such
 as environmental issues, expenditure of customer and root causes for
such
 problems are unavailability of
time
 and accessibility to
such
 products.
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