More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list.  What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve these problems?

The

extinction

and endangerment of wild

animals

is an urgent issue. There are many reasons for

this

state of affairs. In

this

essay

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I will suggest solutions for the problem of the destruction of habitat

due to

illegal logging, and hunting of highly valuable wild

animals

. A major factor leading to the

extinction

of wild

animals

is the destruction of habitat

due to

illegal logging. Many countries designate large areas as national parks;

however

, illegal loggers destroy these areas to obtain rare

woods

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wood

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.

Due to

this

, numerous species of wild

animals

are losing their habitat. The orangutan, found in Indonesia and Malaysia, is a prime example of an animal being pushed to

extinction

because of

this

. The way forward could be that the state should greatly enhance fines and toughen penalties. In turn,

this

will help to increase funding for the forest department. The second factor that leads to the

extinction

and endangerment of wild

animals

is the poaching of valuable and rare species of

animals

and

trading

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of their parts. The illegal wildlife market is a multi-billion euro industry so

for

this

reason many cartels profit from illegitimate trade.

For instance

, the value of Rhino Horns on the black market is leading to significant extirpation of the species. To tackle

this

issue, more money should be spent on recruiting and training forest rangers

which

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duty is to protect natural zones.

However

,

this

solution will be useless until the corrupt government officers involved in the trade of rare wild

animals

are prosecuted by law, and they are punished with prison terms and huge penalties. In conclusion, two major threats to rare wild

animals

due to

illegal logging and poaching. Both of these problems can be solved by allocating government funds and introducing more effective methods of catching lawbreakers.