The preventing and reducing global environmental damage lies with politicians, as there are very little the individuals can do about this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Today, global warming is a main concern for governments and people around the world. As a challenge, politicians lead
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issue and try constantly to fight against activities or situations that could put in danger the environment, as well as the people who believes that it is important to find ways to prevent the damage of ecosystems in nature.
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, it is important that all actors in the society, including politicians, environmentalists and citizens of the world, get together to build new proposals and create awareness about the importance of preventing or reduce environmental catastrophe. In my opinion, all actions that we can take today will be the tomorrows pillars. As we know, some countries include actions in their local politics to save the environment and mitigate the damages, because they are committed to international organizations who work for the nature conservancy.
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, Colombia is part of the Climate Change Convention of United Nations since 1980, and every Colombian politician has had the responsibility to implement actions against climate deterioration.
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, others like United States decided to decline
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politics because some politicians did not believe that climate change is real, and they think that reduce environmental damage is not a state priority.
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, situations like changes in seasons, heavy rains in different places of the world or hurricanes are consequences of environmental harm and is the government's responsibility to prevent, reduce and mitigate threats.
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and not less important, what really matters are the actions that individuals -environmentalists or not- could do.
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, a research from McGill University concluded that a group of people in Toronto reduce by a 67% the impact of plastics in the environment, by only recovering plastic bottles and glasses from the woods.
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may seem like a small action, but if all individuals could implement one action at day, the results should be enormous. In conclusion, I believe that prevent or reduce the environmental damage is a responsibility of politicians as well as individuals, at the end, conserve the nature and make it sustainable, could save our family's future.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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