News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

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as graphical
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Firstly
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, people tend to view
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the news
with visual proofs rather than only reading. To be more precise, if a news has a picture with it,
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people read it
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also increases
the range of sale of newspapers.
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, it is
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a very easy way
to understand the news.
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, children are very fascinated of seeing pictures
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keep keen importance because words describe the picture.
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does not reveal the purpose of the news.
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both are equally crucial for publishing a news. To recapitulate, pictures are
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becoming
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a vital part
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the papers
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • empathize
  • instantaneous comprehension
  • irrefutable evidence
  • transcend language barriers
  • overreliance
  • oversimplification
  • misinformation
  • desensitizing
  • nuance
  • in-depth analysis
  • symbiotic relationship
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