You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also, suggest any improvements to make things better.

Dear Sir, I hope

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letter finds you well and in the best spirits. I am writing

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letter to express my gratitude for providing excellent service to us on my birthday celebration. I am Sam, and recently I celebrated my 25th birthday in your "Tikka Lounge" restaurant. If I talk about the food,

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it was delicious and mouth-watering . We ordered a veg platter, Amritsari Kulcha, and Gulab Jamun for dessert.

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, my friends tasted a Pina Colada. Your staff did an amazing job. They even brought a cake for us

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there was a birthday party. We got our food in no time.

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place provides a friendly and peaceful environment. All things considered, I would say there is nothing to improve. But if you include some Chinese, Mexican and fast food in your restaurant,

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it would be great. I hope you will take it as a valuable consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon! Yours faithfully, Sam.

kaurjagdeep2097

Sep 15, 2025

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Use short, clear paragraphs. Put one main idea in each paragraph: thank you, then food, then service and mood, then a small change, then a closing wish.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

169 words

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