You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months Say how your work could be done while you are away Ask for his/her help in arranging it

Dear Manager, I am writing to inform you about my desire to work in our head office in America for the

next

six months as I believe that I will gain valuable experience that will benefit us here at home. My assistance is more than capable to manage our facility while I am gone and I am hoping that you could make

this

happen. The primary reason why I want to embark on

this

six month trip to our headquarters is to learn more about marketing. Recently, our sales have gone down in comparison to our other branches, and I would like to take advantage of

this

ongoing marketing training

that is

only available at our head office in America.

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Mike my assistance, who has been understudying me for several years will be capable to run our branch while am away. I believe he has a complete understanding of how we run our services, and he is

well liked

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all our workers. In fact, during my annual leave when he was in charge there was

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improvement in our sales. I would be very grateful if you could discuss

this

with the board of executives at the

next

meeting. Looking forward to your response. Yours Sincerely, Victor Oyelude.