You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months Say how your work could be done while you are away Ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Manager, I am writing to inform you about my desire to work in our head office in America for the
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six months as I believe that I will gain valuable experience that will benefit us here at home. My assistance is more than capable to manage our facility while I am gone and I am hoping that you could make
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happen. The primary reason why I want to embark on
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six month trip to our headquarters is to learn more about marketing. Recently, our sales have gone down in comparison to our other branches, and I would like to take advantage of
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ongoing marketing training
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only available at our head office in America.
Mr.
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Mike my assistance, who has been understudying me for several years will be capable to run our branch while am away. I believe he has a complete understanding of how we run our services, and he is
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all our workers. In fact, during my annual leave when he was in charge there was
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improvement in our sales. I would be very grateful if you could discuss
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with the board of executives at the
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meeting. Looking forward to your response. Yours Sincerely, Victor Oyelude.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional development
  • global operations
  • cross-functional
  • remote work
  • progress updates
  • logistical arrangements
  • cultural exchange
  • continuity plan
  • enhance my skillset
  • broaden my horizons
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