People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities? You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays many
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Nowadays, many
young people are
studing
reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
standing
in different colleges to
fullfil
put in effect
fulfil
their dreams like getting job in top most
company
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companies
based on their education certificate and increase their subject knowledge to understand different
culture
.
Firstly
,
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,
currently as per trend lot of students
are
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is
intersted
having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
entrusted
to study in local and aboard universities for getting their diploma memo
in
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on
their
intersted
having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
subject rather than to study in normal schools because of the value of the degree based on
this
they will get
good job
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a good job
in
market
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the market
and
same time
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the same time
they will reach their target in life.
For Example
,
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,
As per CNN research many developing
countires
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
like India and Brazil students are moving to America for higher studies in top universities,
moreover
after completed course they immediately placed in good position based on their
intersted
having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
sector and wages is almost 20% different from others.
Secondly
, on the other side certain people is very much
intersted
having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
to lean subject to understand the
legacy
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legacy, culture
culture
and their behaviour to
reseach
systematic investigation to establish facts
research
about past things to useful to present generation,
however it
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however, it
will benefit to others in many ways like
protect
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protecting
the
culture
and passing information to others.
For Instance
, In India research team identified one document related
to prevent
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to preventing
cancer
medicance
the branches of medical science that deal with nonsurgical techniques
medicines
information in old
library
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library, hence
hence
it's very useful to
rightnow
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right now
people for cure the problem. In Conclusion, youth is very much
intersted
having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
to attend educational
instatutes
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in statutes
because of getting
value
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the value
of the study through getting
good job
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a good job
in the market and same time easily understand about
past
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past cultures
a past culture
the past culture
culture
and their behaviour to current generations to protect to more information.
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