People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities? You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience. Write at least 250 words.
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Fully explain your ideas
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- Sentence 2 - Example
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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